i dont realy see were your going with your sketches of the poster. can you explain it to me. i want to know whats happening because the balloon looks nice
for the logo i like it better then the other ones they have less going on and your sticking with only a couple of colors. i like the first and 2nd one. something that bugs me is the top right corner. it looks to rounded try to keep it the same as the bottom left angle.
logo: the L is very hard to make make out. perhaps an outer stroke to the whole logo will define the border better.
Posters: they look more like brochure layouts than posters. A poster is ephemeral and intended to view quickly. if there is too much going on a person may not want to view it or get confused by its message. try to grasp their attention with a visual then when they walk closer perhaps have the detail in an organized location. i understand the reference to the balloon, but the correlation is a bit off. I thought you were going food... so lets see food?
i dont realy see were your going with your sketches of the poster. can you explain it to me. i want to know whats happening because the balloon looks nice
ReplyDeletefor the logo i like it better then the other ones they have less going on and your sticking with only a couple of colors. i like the first and 2nd one. something that bugs me is the top right corner. it looks to rounded try to keep it the same as the bottom left angle.
ReplyDeletelogo: the L is very hard to make make out. perhaps an outer stroke to the whole logo will define the border better.
ReplyDeletePosters: they look more like brochure layouts than posters. A poster is ephemeral and intended to view quickly. if there is too much going on a person may not want to view it or get confused by its message. try to grasp their attention with a visual then when they walk closer perhaps have the detail in an organized location. i understand the reference to the balloon, but the correlation is a bit off. I thought you were going food... so lets see food?